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What I Could BeIf only you gave me that one chance,
I would have had you in a trance.
You would of seen what I could be,
And how much you mean to me.

Instead you pushed me away,
So I will never forget this day.
But I'm going to show you,
Just what could have been, between us two.

Then I'll make you see,
That you were never ment for me.
Cause I've found someone better,
Who is a hell of a lot more sweeter.

And she's willing to give me a go,
Cause she has seen my entire show.

My True LoveFrom the first time I saw your face,
My heart began to race.
I wanted to be with you all the time,
I wanted to tell everyone you were mine.
Then I looked into your eyes,
And it made me realize.
That you're the love I've been longing for,
And I hope to be with you forever more.

What I FeelWhen I close my eyes,
You're the first thought that pops into my head.
But it's no surprise,
Cause every time I see you, I turn red.
But do you know that you're my prize,
And that we were ment to be.
So I hope one day you will realize,
Just what you mean to me.

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she's only happy when it rains

by ~beauTifooL, May 3, 2005, 10:59:26 AM
Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Traditional Fixed Forms

german

Kleine Prinzessen,
ist nur glücklich wenn es stürmt
verfallen der Finsterness
verfallen dem Bann der Selbstzerstörung

Kleine Prinessin,
ist nur glücklich wenn es stürmt
entfallen der Realität
entfallen jedem funken Liebe

Kleine Prinzessin,
es stürmt immer,
es stürmt immer,
bist du glücklich?

english
Little princess,
she's only happy when it rains
depending on darkness
dependig on the spell of self destruction

Little princess,
she's only happy when it rains
escaped of the reality
escaped to every spark of the love

Little princess,
it always rains,
it always rains,
are you happy?

she's only happy when it rainsby ~beauTifooL

Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Traditional Fixed Forms

just thoughts.
unpretty.
unfaked.

i dunno if it's the right section and blaaah..

i don't need compassion and i don't want comments like 'don't do this!'
and don't ask why i do this.

i wrote this in german and i guess
the english is not right and can't express
the feelings truely.

~Tinsel-Wig May 8, 2005 Writer

! So affective! Simple, yet it makes the reader question the whole situation. Who is the girl? Where is she? Why is she so unhappy? etc. I love it.

~beauTifooL May 8, 2005

thank you

~Tinsel-Wig May 8, 2005 Writer

Welcome.

~outrageous May 6, 2005

das ist alles andere als unschön. mir gefällts. ich finds schön. sehr schön.
*fav*

~beauTifooL May 6, 2005

vielen dank (:

*Eimer May 3, 2005 Professional Digital Artist

WAAA, ich kann irgendwie nichts mehr zu den Fav's tun...komisch...da steht zwar das es geaddet wurde, blos ist dann nix in meinen Fav's

~beauTifooL May 4, 2005

naja die meißten finden dieses krank
gar nicht so liebenswert

un wegen den fav's musst
du glaub ich einfach mal aktualisiern

*Eimer May 3, 2005 Professional Digital Artist

du bist einfach soooo liebenswert krank

....ich liebe dieses bild...wie soviel anderes von dir

*Bagheera-8 May 3, 2005

This is the first piece of this kind that I've ever favorited. There's something compelling about your piece. My only disagreement is when you say it's "unpretty" because that's just not true. It is dark and erotic and strangely beautiful.

~beauTifooL May 3, 2005

I'm glad you like it.
means a lot to me.

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